Blog 18: Third Answer
Content:
Just like you did for answer 1 and 2 post your:
- EQ
- What is the best way a medical missionary can provide medical aid to those living in poverty in the Philippines?
- Answer #3 (Write in a complete sentence like a thesis statement)*
- The best way a medical missionary can provide medical aid to those living in poverty in the Philippines is by donating tools and supplies that local hospitals can use to treat patients.
- 3 details to support the answer (a detail is a fact and an example)
- While government hospitals are well equipped, 60% of hospitals in the Philippines are privately owned, and their biggest issue is inadequate facilities.
- During the mission I took place on, I found out that we had designated amounts of supplies for each place we went to, and that anything left over at the end of our time at each place was donated back to those hospitals
- Most of the supplies we used on the mission was donated by the hospitals my grandfather works at or even bought by him and the rest of the medical team out of pocket.
- The research source (s) to support your details and answer
- My medical mission experience
- http://www.expatforum.com/articles/health/health-care-in-the-philippines.html
- Concluding Sentence
- While encouraging local doctors and medical personel to give back in the Philippines is important, what is probably more important is making sure those medical personel has the equipment they need to be able to give back to their community.
*Write your answer like you would write a thesis statement. Please don't give us one or two words or start your sentence with "by". Thanks!
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